her eyes said hello
her smile takes the show
beautiful amazing from head 2 toe
not conceited n wont deal with a relationship
if shes being mistreated
very independent intellectial type
can handle her liquor n drink all night
always on the move not lazy
has the tendency 2 work hard like slavery
any children she has never go without
food in all the cabinets in the house

I like this one.

Very nice...
Not many women are independent..but I am.

:)

I LOVE THIS ONE AS WELL

stupid as shit.... poor references to social stigmas and dark history and trying to use it as some sort of compliment?


dude, dont quit your day job of bussing tables... leave the poetry to those who have some sort of command of the language-references, etc.

WELL IT WAS PRETTY TO ME I WOULD LIKE TO SEE YOU EVEN TRY TO WRITE A POEM

"even try"... that is the easiest part is trying...... dumbass, "EVEN try"... you speak like a silly, typically public school educated teen, destined to be some blue collar, working class labor monkey just like your parents, working for people like me, making us richer and continue living well....

here's a few poems for ya:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
With a face like that,
You should be in a zoo

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The roses are wilted,
The violets are dead
The sugar bowl's empty
And so is your head

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you call me a mad hatter
you seem rather bitter
eat more junk food, as you get fatter

you say I really suck
but I digress
you show your true colors, because you are one dumb fuck!

The girl voiced her opinion and you put her down. Give the people who don't want to argue with you a break! Rose is a sweet girl.

Looks don't always matter, you're constantly putting people down everyday. Get real, stop trying to make people feel like shit. It'll backfire though, I strongly believe in Karma.

Start on me, I dare ya! I'm in a bitchy mood this morning. If you wanna go rounds on this shitty dating site insulting each other, come on. You knOw I don't tolerate your bullshit, I also try to be cool with you too. You seem like a cool guy to know, you just gotta dig thru shit after shit to get that part of you out. I just don't understand why you gotta be so cruel.

If cruel is the word you wanna be known for, I'm sorry for that. There's no since in it, I don't care how smart or good looking you think you are. You're not all that. Trust me! I'm glad you believe in yourself so much though.

yeah unlike you i am beautiful to many people i would rather be ugly than a asshole like you

thank you for defending me but i dont let assholes like that get to me

The girl voiced her opinion and you put her down. Give the people who don't want to argue with you a break! Rose is a sweet girl.

Looks don't always matter, you're constantly putting people down everyday. Get real, stop trying to make people feel like shit. It'll backfire though, I strongly believe in Karma. 

Start on me, I dare ya! I'm in a bitchy mood this morning. If you wanna go rounds on this shitty dating site insulting each other, come on. You knOw I don't tolerate your bullshit, I also try to be cool with you too. You seem like a cool guy to know, you just gotta dig thru shit after shit to get that part of you out. I just don't understand why you gotta be so cruel. 

If cruel is the word you wanna be known for, I'm sorry for that. There's no since in it, I don't care how smart or good looking you think you are. You're not all that. Trust me! I'm glad you believe in yourself so much though.

LOL.... dont be so whiny... I actually like Rose, her comments and some of her clever retorts... sort of wished she would have used one of them on me before you stuck your nose into it... but hey, freedomm of speech, its a good thing. Plus you have already admitted to being weak (i.e. "bitchy mood")... in the morning no doubt... so what is so shitty in life at the moment to be waking up on another glorious, beautiful day that is making you anxious? Whatever it is, I truly hope it gets better.... Id prefer you to be on your game ... makes a better sport when both participants are strong.

by the way... a lot of people attack guys like me on "thinking this and that about ourselves"... when have I ever insinuated such? people's perceptions reveals that it is from THEM, their frame of reference, their thinking, their insecurites that classifies us... its no different to the large amount of people that also perceive the positive and complimentary "you are this or that because..." still, it comes from them...

I agree with some of what you said... Please don't be messing around with Crystal or Rose, they are both my friends... I know you live a pretty good life and are very intelligent as well as physically fit... You are a business man, I have a "sure thing investment" you may be interested in... It's in London but I'm sure you have been there many times but it is a good business offer...

hahaha!! no woman on this site is independent! poor title my friend

You don't know that!

i am ask any one

thank you your awesome urself

Thanks 4 dissing n thanks 4 listening
Got my bachelors n raping n laughing
At ppl on this site that hate n wait 4 a reaction
Fake coward loser disgrace 2 mankind
I served my country I did my time
If I really cared n listened 2 feedback
I would b waiting tables n I dnt need that
Poor excuse a waste of 9 months
Ur the reason why women turn lesbian
Hating on me like u know me
If u dnt like my material rip out ur retnas
Other than that mind ur buisness

Raping? Lol. I'm hoping you mean rapping.

Lesbians are born lesbians!

But a waste of 9 months? I definitely agree on that one.

i agree as well

LOL SPELL CHECK RAPPING NOT RAPING LOL

UR A WASTE OF 9 MONTHS UR THE GUY N JAIL GETTIN HIS BUTT FILLED WIT SHANKS COWARD UR SO GAY HERE ILL MAKE IT EASY OPEN UR MOUTH N PULL THE TRIGGER BLOW OFF UR HEAD CUZ UR THE NIGGER