Shes beautiful glamorous without a doubt
She's quite a catch & that's from word of mouth
She has her own home car & not a slouch
She stays away from losers & liars Ouch
She doesn't need a man 2 pretend that he cares
She has her family
Plus the love from her kids
She knows how 2 survive
She's meant a lot of fakes that wanna take her for a ride
But she s better than that & I can't is not an option
She takes care of her body
She's not a whore she's grown
And obviously she knows what she's lookin for
She's witnessed grown men act like kids
Say they love her then they cheat on her & the kids
How can you love if you don't love yourself
And why get married just for the kids common wealth
Don't take the vows unless you mean it
Stay single so a divorce won't be needed

A generally good attempt at communication. If you've come from a typical education, this is an exemplory effort, albeit, full of grammar and structure errors. Your point has been made, though, so hurray for you.

Poetry has no structure guidelines. Those that think it does, have no idea what real poetry is.

Jim! How long were you a teacher?lol.

There is no recipe rhyme or reason when it comes to art! It is simply there to help us express our feelings, state of mind and the place in our lives as we know it, or in a attempt to extract the same from others.

I get what new guy is saying and if this is his creation it is awesome in the fact that at least he isn't plagiarizing some one elses work! I liked it but I am sure it was directed at the ladies.

First of all relax-it's part poetry & rap I state facts-is there a problem because I didn't put you on my track-I love critics and how they bash everybody-but I really could care less about anybody-you can't make everyone happy I know this-but new flash I wasn't tryin to get your thumbs up for this-it's my thoughts rather they rhyme or not-if your a teacher you should change your profession-buy a hip hop album then lecture hip hop as your lesson-I'm not Shakespeare & I'm fine with that-but I write what I feel-reply to that

I be understandin you bro.